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								II. THE PERIOD
								OF INFLUENCE
							
						
					
					 
					 
					
					4. 1942
					 
					    There is always a lag between the time a story is
					written and the time it is published -- this is a constant bit of uncertainty
					in a writer's life and a factor I suspect most readers seldom have reason
					to be aware of.  It may take three months for a single magazine to
					make up its mind about a story, and five or ten magazines may see a story
					before it is finally bought.  After a story is accepted, it may take
					another year for it to be published.  Probably the usual minimum gap
					between writing and publishing is six months; the maximum, even for good
					stories, may be several years.  But there is always a lag.
					 
					    This explains why Heinlein stories were published
					in 1942 when he was working at the Naval Air Material Center in Philadelphia
					and not writing, and why no Heinlein stories were published in 1946 when
					he very definitely was writing.  The stories published in 1942 were
					written earlier.  (Incidentally, all of them came out under Heinlein's
					pen names; none were under his own name.)  And all the Heinlein stories
					written in 1946 were published later.
					 
					    In
					
					the case of " 'My Object All Sublime' " (Future,
					February 1942), I suspect that the lag was
					a long one.  It reads as though it were one of Heinlein's very earliest
					efforts, and it may well be that early story of his that he says was rejected
					thirteen times before it was purchased.
					 
					    The story involves an invisibility device explained
					in this manner:
					 
						
							
								"The principle is similar to total reflection. 
								I throw a prolate ellipsoid field about my body.  Light strikes the
								screen at any point, runs on the surface of the field for a hundred and
								eighty degrees, and departs at the antipodal point with its direction and
								intensity unchanged.  In effect, it makes a detour around me."
							
						
					 
					    This
					
					is vague enough to allow
					of varied interpretation, but, as given, it would seem that objects on
					the other side of the field would appear reversed.  A friend of mine,
					John Myers, a student in mathematics and logic who has examined the story,
					suggests they would be distorted and upside down as well.  But let
					that go.
					 
					    What
					
					does the inventor
					do with this fabulous device?  He uses it to hide himself while he
					stands on busy street corners and squirts synthetic skunk juice on drivers
					whose manners offend him. (The quotation-used-as-title is from
					
						The Mikado,
					
					and
					until I looked it up it seemed to have nothing to do with the story. 
					It turns out that the sublime object is "to make the punishment fit the
					crime."  Heinlein must have something against bad drivers -- in
					
						Starship Troopers,
					
					a more recent novel, he has them flogged.  Serves 'em
					right, too, I say.)  Beyond this, the story is told in a curious mixture
					of the past and present tenses, with changes from one to the other within
					single sentences.  For clear and obvious reasons the story has never
					been reprinted.
					 
					    In
					
					passing, I might add
					that the story illustration is also bad, more amateurish than anything
					else.  The artist thereafter gave up art for other pursuits, turning
					into an author, critic, and anthologist of note.  His name is Damon
					Knight.
					
					    "Goldfish
					
					Bowl" appeared in
					
						Astounding
					
					in March.  Two waterspouts capped by a cloud
					appear near Hawaii -- water goes up one spout and down the other. 
					These curiosities, along with ball lightning, mysterious disappearances,
					and a number of other strange phenomena, all turn out to be the doing of
					never-seen atmospheric intelligences as superior to us as we are to fish. 
					The story is merely a statement of this situation, with the supposedly
					ironic comparison of us to fish hammered home at the end.  However
					no resolution of the situation is offered, and 10,000 words seem a lot
					to spend on a dead irony.  This is more yard goods, the sort of thing
					that can be turned out by the ream without thinking.  It's readable
					stuff, but no more than that.
					 
					    "Pied
					
					Piper" is another never-reprinted
					Lyle Monroe story, this time from the March 1942
					
						Astonishing,
					
					and
					is another candidate for the Rejected Thirteen Times Sweepstakes. 
					The most truly astonishing thing about this issue (after a letter from
					one Isaac Azimov [sic] ) was that it cost only ten cents.  It seems
					almost incredible in these days when you can't even buy a comic book for
					that price.
					 
					    "Pied Piper" takes place in an undesignated country
					at an undefined time.  As the solution to a war, an elderly scientist
					kidnaps all the opposing country's children and when the chief general
					of his own country objects to a settlement of the war, the scientist disposes
					of him by shooting him off into another dimension.  It is all very
					bland and never-neverish.
					 
					    These
					
					first three
					stories are all lacking in significance and importance.  On the other
					hand, Heinlein's last three stories of 1942 not only have meanings that
					extend beyond the solution of a trivial situation, but are all thoroughly
					enjoyable reading.  Two of them, "Waldo" and
					
						Beyond This Horizon,
					
					mark
					a culmination to Heinlein's first period, being every bit as good as 
         " '--We Also Walk Dogs' " and much longer and more 
         involved, and much more significant.
					 
					   
					
						Unknown,
						
						Astounding's
					
					fantasy
					companion, published something more than forty novels and short novels
					in the four years of its existence, most of them still readable, and some
					quite excellent.  Of the whole lot, "The Unpleasant Profession of
					Jonathan Hoag" remains one of my favorites for all that I can see that
					it is severely flawed.  Not everybody likes it.  P. Schuyler
					Miller considers it strictly a pot-boiler.  In some ways it is, but
					it was also written with an amount of involvement that offsets most of
					its deficiencies.
					 
					    Our world, in "The Unpleasant Profession of Jonathan
					Hoag," is explained as a piece of artwork done by a beginning student. 
					The "canvas" originally focused on some rather unpleasant creatures known
					as "the Sons of the Bird," but the teacher of our student found them lacking
					in appeal.  However, instead of painting them out, the student made
					the mistake of redoing them in the guise of the ordinary humans he peopled
					the world with.  Now this piece of artwork is being judged by art
					critics, appreciating it from the inside as men, who will decide whether
					or not it is worth preserving.
					 
					    This explanation comes as a denouement to the story. 
					The story proper involves the efforts of a private detective and his wife
					to find out for Jonathan Hoag exactly how it is that he spends his days. 
					He does not remember.  All he knows is that from time to time he finds
					a disturbing brown grime under his fingernails that he is convinced is
					dried blood.
					 
					    The Sons of the Bird, who lurk in that mysterious
					world behind mirrors, do not know the truth about the way the world was
					made.  Instead they have an elaborate mythology that says they were
					cast down and made subordinate in some ways to human beings (who are, according
					to this myth, their own creations) because of pride and insufficient
					cruelty. 
					They do know the grime under Hoag's fingernails for what it is --
					their own blood -- and know Hoag for their enemy, and consequently attempt
					to keep Randall, the detective, from finding out for Hoag what he wishes
					to know.
					 
					    Hoag is a schizophrenic for fair.  He is one
					of the art critics.  Part of his time is spent in dealing with the
					Sons of the Bird, and the rest of his time, unaware that he is anything
					but a man, unaware of his other activities, he spends in savoring life,
					in the process gathering the material for his critical other self to make
					its judgment.
					 
					    The frame for the story is a fine one.  The
					background is very neatly worked out.  The only trouble is that the
					interior logic of the story is full of holes.  This does not eliminate
					my liking for the story, but it does temper it.
					 
					    In the scene that opens the story, Man-Hoag has
					apparently been sent by Critic-Hoag to visit a doctor named Potbury, who
					is one of the Sons.  This is never explicitly said, but can be
					inferred. 
					The purpose of this visit is to frighten the Sons of the Bird.  Why
					it is necessary to frighten the Sons of the Bird is never explained. 
					The person who is really frightened by the visit is Man-Hoag -- he is frightened
					enough to consult a private detective when the doctor won't tell him what
					the grime under his nails is and when he cannot remember what he does with
					himself during the day.  Since Critic-Hoag can apparently turn Man-Hoag
					on and off as he pleases, there is no reason for Man-Hoag to be allowed
					to be frightened except that it suits Heinlein's purposes to bring in Edward
					Randall and his wife, and he cannot do this unless Hoag is frightened enough
					to consult a detective.
					 
					    Why is Potiphar Potbury, a Son of the Bird, also
					a doctor?  This is not explained.  More important, why do the
					Sons of the Bird spend their time persecuting the Randalls, who are doing
					them no harm, when they really ought to be out persecuting Jonathan Hoag,
					who
					
						is?
					
					 
					    If Heinlein had bothered to spend fifty more pages
					in tying loose ends and developing his story further, it might have been
					as good as anything he has ever done.  As it is, it does have several
					things to recommend it: the Sons of the Bird; the student, his teacher
					and the art critics; a very nicely developed relationship between Randall
					and his wife -- one of the very few comfortable inter-sexual relationships
					Heinlein has ever described; and a nice appreciation of a number of simple
					pleasures.  Looking back, the story itself has no reason for being
					-- the Sons of the Bird would logically have been eliminated before the
					story started.  The story doesn't make any sense at all from that
					point of view, but it does
					
						mean
					
					something.
					 
					    Damon
					
					Knight
					once wrote:*
					 
						
							
								It's unhappily true that most current science
								fiction stories neither make sense nor mean anything; but it occurs to
								me that as long as we're asking, we may as well ask for what we really
								want -- the story, now nearly extinct, which does both.
							
						
					 
					    "The Unpleasant Profession of Jonathan Hoag" does mean
					something -- and unusually for Heinlein, its meaning is on an emotional
					rather than an intellectual level -- but it does not make any good sense
					at all.  I wish it did.
					
					    The distinction between fantasy and science fiction
					is one that is usually made by saying, "Well, you know what I mean," and
					usually we do.  There are a great number of formulations of the distinction
					extant, but none of them has ever been generally adopted.  More than
					that, however, we don't even have a generally accepted definition of what
					science fiction is before we go into comparisons of it and other things. 
					(My favorite definition of science fiction, by the way, is "Science fiction
					means what we point to when we say it," which, of course, is a backhanded
					way of saying, "Well, you know what I mean.")  What we do have is
					a great big mess, and the reason we have it is that we insist on slapping
					labels on things.  Not only do we not have a generally accepted distinction
					between fantasy and science fiction, I doubt that we ever will.
					 
					    The
					
					reason for bringing
					up the topic is an Anson MacDonald story entitled "Waldo" in the August
					1942 issue of
					
						Astounding. 
					
					Beyond the fact that it was originally
					published in a science fiction magazine, I am certain that this is a science
					fiction story rather than a fantasy story, but I am very far from certain
					that I can satisfactorily explain why.
					 
					    The
					
					basic elements
					of "Waldo" are four: a Pennsylvania hex doctor who may be well over a hundred
					years old and whose magic actually works; "deKalb power receptors" that
					have suddenly ceased to operate properly though nothing seems to be wrong
					with them; a rising incidence of general myasthenia -- abnormal muscular
					weakness and fatigue -- in the population; and Waldo, an engineering genius
					and paranoid misanthrope afflicted by
					myasthenia gravis**
					who lives in a satellite home popularly known as "Wheelchair." 
					Heinlein has managed to tie this all together into a fascinating whole.
					 
					    The deKalbs are failing, and their proprietors,
					North American Power-Air Co., are worried.  They can't lick the problem
					and are convinced that the only man who might is Waldo.  However,
					the company once cut Waldo out of some patents that he is convinced should
					have been his and they are far from sure that he will do any further business
					with them.
					 
					    Dr. Gus Grimes, Waldo's personal physician since
					childhood and his only friend, is worried by the rise of myasthenia in
					the population and is convinced that background radiation has something
					to do with it.  He wants Waldo to take on the problem of the failing
					deKalbs and not only work out a solution, but find one that will necessitate
					cutting down the amount of general radiation.
					 
					    Waldo's own problem is his sickness and his misanthropy,
					the misanthropy being a direct result of his sickness.  His success
					is a matter of over-compensation, and the more successful he is the more
					alienated he becomes, thus leaving him with that much more to compensate
					for.
					 
					    Gramps Schneider, the Pennsylvania hex doctor, has
					no problems except that he has no particular love for machines and complicated
					living.  He is, however, the key to the whole situation.  Waldo
					takes on NAPA's problem, but then is unable to solve it, let alone in the
					manner Dr. Grimes would prefer.  For all that he can tell, the machines
					ought to be working properly.  Gramps Schneider, however, can fix
					the machines, and he is able to give Waldo the insights by which he solves
					the problem of the failing deKalbs, the problem of radiation and general
					myasthenia, and the problem of his own sickness.
					 
					    Completely aside from the main problem, Heinlein
					has included some truly lovely conceits.  The best-known of these
					are the machines known as "waldoes," devices for remote control
					manipulation. 
					Similar machines are in commercial use today, first developed for handling
					radioactive material, and are generally known as waldoes after those described
					in the story.  But this is not the only ingenious idea given. 
					Waldo's satellite home and the behavior of Waldo's pets, a canary and a
					mastiff, raised from birth in free fall, are particularly well-imagined. 
					None of this is necessary to the story, but it does add richness to it.
					 
					    The reason for my original puzzlement as to how
					"Waldo" should be categorized -- science fiction or fantasy -- is the nature
					of the solution to the various given problems.  It turns out that
					the deKalbs are failing because their operators are thinking negative
					thoughts. 
					Gramps Schneider fixes the deKalbs by reaching for power into the "Other
					World."  And Waldo fixes both himself and the failing deKalbs by leaming
					to reach for power into the Other World, too.
					 
					    More than this, Waldo becomes convinced that the
					various magical arts are all aborted sciences, abandoned before they had
					been made clear; that the world has been made what it is by minds thinking
					it so (the world was flat until geographers decided it was round, and the
					deKalbs worked because their operators thought they would); that the Other
					World does exist; and that he, Waldo, can make the Other World what he
					wants it to be, for all time, by deciding its nature and convincing everybody
					else of his ideas.
					 
					    Throughout
					
					much of his
					fiction, Heinlein has injected bits of mysticism, just as he did here in
					"Waldo." What keeps "Waldo" and most of the others from being fantasies,
					it seems to me, is his approach to the mysticism.  "Magic, Inc." is
					a fantasy because the answers are cut-and-dried.  Magic does work,
					period.  Do thus-andsuch and thus-and-thus will result. 
					In "Waldo," we only know one thing for certain: there is something out
					there, call it the "Other World" for convenience, from which power can
					be siphoned.  All the rest is Waldo's tentative construction of the
					state of affairs -- he may be right or he may be wrong, but we have no
					certain way of knowing.  In part, this is Heinlein's way of saying,
					"There are more things in heaven and earth than are dreamt of in your
					philosophy,"
					and that is a far from illegitimate thing for a science fiction story to
					say.  In part, too, I think this derives from Heinlein's background
					and training.  As a writer, he remains very much an engineer. 
					His interest has always been not so much in why things work as in how they
					work, and as long as he exposits the "how" clearly, he is willing to leave
					the "why" as a tentative answer.
					 
					    If the answers Heinlein were to give were not tentative,
					if the story said, "And this is exactly what those things in heaven and
					earth you haven't dreamt of are," and these answers fall outside what we
					think the world to be like, the story would be a fantasy.  As long
					as the answers remain tentative, as in "Waldo," the story remains one that
					I can point to when I say "science fiction," even though the answers may
					again be ones that fall outside the bounds of what we think the world to
					be like.
					 
					    I
					
					have an affection for
					unified plots, stories in which everything ties together at the end. 
					I don't mind an intriguing question or two left for the reader to answer,
					but I do mind questions that arise only because the writer is a sloppy
					craftsman.  Certainly too many science fiction stories written these
					days take one single mangy idea and stretch and stretch it, remaining unified
					out of ennui.  On the other hand, I have almost as much dislike for
					old A.E. van Vogt stories that were so full of ideas that they leaked out
					the sides.  Van Vogt used to have a conscious policy of introducing
					at least one new idea every 800 words.  This gave his stories movement,
					but it never gave them unity, and it was always possible to fill a wheelbarrow
					with ideas proposed and then half-used and forgotten.
					 
					    Many
					
					of Robert Heinlein's early stories were like this.  For example,
					here is Alva Rogers*** on
					
						Methuselah's Children: 
					
					"Full of adventure,
					conflict, romance, and enough casually tossed-off ideas to serve as the
					basis for a half-dozen other stories."  This is true, but I'm not
					quite as pleased with the situation as Rogers is.  I wish Heinlein
					had written those other half-dozen stories and put his ideas to better
					use.  I think this is one of the things he came to realize during
					his apprenticeship.
					 
					   
					
						Beyond
						
						This Horizon
					
					(Astounding,
					April
					and May 1942) probably has as much of a Roman candle plot, shooting off
					in all directions, as Heinlein ever wrote.  However, in spite of all
					that I have said about ununified plots, it remains one of my two favorite
					Heinlein stories.
					 
					    The ostensible central theme of
					
						Beyond This Horizon
					
					concerns
					a young man who is the end product of four generations of genetic control
					concentrating on producing a man of all-around competence.  The respects
					in which he is superior to the majority of men are intended to be eventually
					conserved in the whole race; the hero, Hamilton Felix, is something of
					a pilot project.  However, he sees no reason to have children. 
					In fact, he refuses to unless he can have it demonstrated to him what,
					if any, purpose there is to human existence.  As one character in
					the book says when another objects that this is a stupid question:  "He
					did not ask it stupidly."  And he does not.
					 
					    Two things cause him to change his mind.  One
					is a revolution that he sees from the seamy side.  A group of social
					misfits attempt to overturn society and put things the way they
					
						ought
					
					to
					be with " 'true men -- supermen -- sitting on top (that's themselves) and
					the rest of the population bred to fit requirements.' "  The second
					thing that causes him to change his mind is an agreement by his society
					that it might be worthwhile to investigate philosophical problems on a
					scientific basis -- including the possibility of survival after death,
					which Hamilton takes to be the one satisfactory answer to his question. 
					(Though exactly why he does is not clear to me.  The simple survival
					of the soul -- the knowledge that you will exist longer than you originally
					thought you would -- does not strike me as a worthwhile purpose for
					existence). 
					But this agreement to investigate does satisfy Hamilton and he becomes
					willing to father the children his society desires him to have.
					 
					    This action covers two-thirds of the book, and several
					months in time, and was the logical place to stop.  However, Heinlein
					strings his story out for another five years or so, skimmed over in perhaps
					20,000 words.  This covers Hamilton's marriage, his first two children,
					and an indication that reincarnation, whether or not the research ever
					demonstrates it, does exist as a fact.
					 
					    I said this was the ostensible central theme, because
					I don't believe that this is what the story is really about.  I think
					this is another case, rather, of a story about process.  This society
					is fascinating, and though Hamilton is the central character if anyone
					is, there is a great deal of switching viewpoints to give us various views
					of the society in action.  The society is a libertarian one: to be
					a first-class citizen you must wear a gun, and if you aren't careful about
					your manners, you must be prepared to use it.  Social conventions
					are gone into in detail, but beyond this, Heinlein deals with two love
					stories, eugenics, finance, and even adds a dash of satire with a young
					man from 1926 found in a newly-opened "level-entropy field" who makes a
					living for himself by setting up leagues of professional football teams. 
					The revolution is not the central issue in
					
						Beyond This Horizon
					
					--
					revolutions and high level double-dealing have ruined more science fiction
					novels than I care to count, but this is not one of them.  The central
					issue is day-to-day living in a truly strange society.  That this
					is so is the only reason that Heinlein could get away with writing on as
					long as he does after his main story line has run out.  That this
					is so is the only reason that Heinlein could get away with writing about
					so many different things without having his story fall apart.  Hamilton
					Felix is an interesting character, but it is his society that is Heinlein's
					hero and Hamilton is only our guide through it.
					 
					    I still retain my affection for unified plots.
					
						Beyond
						This Horizon
					
					doesn't have one, but I still find it thoroughly delightful. 
					Call it an exception.
					 
					 
					 
					 
					 
					 
					 
						
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